Wednesday 4 December 2013

The Hoka Series As A Whole

The first volume, Earthman's Burden (New York, 1979), is six stories; the second, Hoka (New York, 1985) is four; total ten.

The first story describes Alexander Jones' arrival on the planet Toka as an Ensign. From the third story, he is the plenipotentiary of the Interbeing League to Toka. The second story, written later, fills in the gap by describing a Tokan delegation to Earth and ends with Jones being appointed plenipotentiary.

The third, fourth, fifth and sixth stories are a linear sequence of events on Toka. After the sixth story, Jones writes a letter in which he states that, after an important baseball game, he will take a delegation to Earth to apply for an upgrading of Toka's status in the League.

The seventh story, to continue the numbering from the first volume, describes the baseball game. In the eighth, the delegation is on Earth but must surmount an obstacle to its application. The story ends with the obstacle overcome. The ninth story recounts what meanwhile happens to Jones' wife Tanni back on Toka.

The tenth story again starts with Tanni on Toka and recounts some events prior to the ninth story. When the action has again moved forward, Kratch obstruction to the Tokan application delays Jones on Earth while the situation on Toka deteriorates. If Jones does not return, the Tokan situation may become so catastrophic that the upgrading will be prevented and Jones' career ended but, if he is known to have returned, then the Kratch will stop obstructing parliamentary discussion of the Tokan application and have it debated without Jones there to put his case or reply to their objections.

Solution: Jones returns in secret. The story ends with the potential catastrophe averted but we still do not know the outcome of the application although it should be a foregone conclusion since the Kratch have been discredited as the fomentors of the crisis.

Thus:

the series, basically a comedy, becomes darker as it proceeds - the comic figures may be led into tragedy;
more could be told and I am yet to learn whether the novel, Star Prince Charlie, continues this narrative or goes off at a tangent.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Star Prince Charlie goes off on a tangent. It's a readable but not great novel, set on a planet other than Toka, involving a young Earth human and his Hoka tutor.

Best Regards, Nicholas

Paul Shackley said...

Nicholas,
Thank you for this information. I feared the title implied a Hoka space armada. I look forward to reading and posting about the book.
Paul.

Sean M. Brooks said...

Hi, Paul and Nicholas!

First, I don't agree, no offense meant, with Nicholas' opinion of STAR PRINCE CHARLIE. Maybe not a "great" book, but still emimently fun and readable

Second, Paul's comment about a Hoka space armada intrigues me. Reminds me of the comic Space Patrol Hoka story. Frankly, I can imagine Hoka admirals rising to high commands if the Interbeing League ever developed a navy. Hokas certainly have the wit, courage, and stamina needed!

Sean